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    • EV/EVO Chronicles: The Omega Conspiracy: Chapters 4 - 6

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      Excellent story so far. 😉 However, you seem to be trying to focus on way to many characters. It's a little hard keeping track of whose who.

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      When did I go Insane?
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      Great work! Good job! I like the story!

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      Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to keep your suggestions in mind while writing the newer chapters.

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      T

      Great story!

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