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Excellent story so far. However, you seem to be trying to focus on way to many characters. It's a little hard keeping track of whose who.

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When did I go Insane?
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Great work! Good job! I like the story!

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To Escape Velocity: Nova and Beyond!
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Millennium. Its coming, prepare for it.
Coming to the (url="http://"http://www.ambrosiaSW.com/games/ev/chronicles.html")EV Chronicles(/url).

Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to keep your suggestions in mind while writing the newer chapters.

Great story!

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"Life is like a trade ship going to JamesTown, you never know what you gona get."-Escape from Monkey island