There's a new chronicle up (I forgot to post this last night ) and so, if you'd like to have a read, drop by (url="http://"http://www.ambrosiasw.com/cgi-bin/ubb/forumdisplay.cgi?action=topics&number;=49")here(/url).
It's the next part of my rewrite of The Fall of the Nervii, and contains the first chapter of of the next section of the story.

Enjoy!

-Andiyar

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"Any good that I may do here, let me do now, for I may not pass this way again"

(Edit - Please note: the word 'section' contains a 't' /Edit)

(This message has been edited by Tarnćlion Andiyarus (edited 11-17-2003).)

I'd love to post there, Ben, but the link to the comments is broken.

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Originally posted by Celchu:
**I'd love to post there, Ben, but the link to the comments is broken.

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Ack. Never trust the 'Move' function. I've deleted the 'broken' topic, and replaced it with a fresh version. Should work now.

-Andiyar

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"Any good that I may do here, let me do now, for I may not pass this way again"

Looks pretty good (I skimmed the beginning, bedtime), and excellent grammar!

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