Hi. Things have been very busy so I have not had to much time to type up more of the script from my note book. I took several course this weekend on Visual Effects, Video game Design (focused more on 3d) and intro course to Maya. Had a blast and am very tired. More will be forth coming, but for now here is a segment from my script (page 91-92)

Wanderers Excerpt:

(Faun Ren -- Lunch Room)

(Brahm is still being tended by the healers and is lying on the table. Kaze is still next to him)

Kaze: I have placed the last section of the sceptor somewhere safe.

Brahm: Thank you.

Kaze: Are you feeling any better?

Brahm: No. Did they tell you that I lost my eyesight?

Kaze: They did not.

(Sophie enters)

Sophie: Morning Brahm, Kaze.

Brahm: Where is Michael? I have not heard from him since I got back.

Sophie: He is helping. When he returns I’ll send him in.

Brahm: Good.

(Suddenly the room gets darker and Norafulg appears)

Norafulg: So this is where you have been hiding.

Kaze: YOU!!

Brahm: It will do you no good. The final piece of the sceptor is not here.

(Kaze attacks Norafulg)

Norafulg: Fa. Worthless...

(Norafulg hits Kaze with a blast of energy that knocks her down)

Norafulg: Then we shall trade....

(Norafulg grabs Sophie)

Norafulg: ...this girl for the staff.

Sophie: NO! LET GO OF ME!

Brahm: SOPHIE!

Norafulg: Find our castle, give me the last section of the staff and you will have the girl back unharmed.

(Brahm stands and rushes towards the sound of Norafulg’s voice, but is thrown back)

Norafulg: You have seven days.

(Norafulg vanishes with Sophie)

I have more typed in but I am still working on the connecting section between this scene and the ones that follows. I hope you enjoyed it. Any and all comments are welcome. I know that some of the above might not make sense since you do not know who the characters are, and please bear in mind that this is a first draft.

Pedrith

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(This message has been edited by Pedrith (edited 05-12-2003).)

besides work, workin on a book for a guy on the side thats almost done, got to finish up some dragon for bodem and then ill have something fun for coldstone forum goers hopefully in about a week then after that i THINK, i can approach my game.........sigh.......

as for the past month april, i finished some ingame overhead people graphics and animations, next up is more interior base designs then some effects like water and things that go boom.

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still not mich progress 'cause of exams... did some graphics though... my graphist has drawn a lot recently so I'll have many things to scan, colorize and implement in the game... the script's progressing very slowly and I can't do much whithout it so I think I'll "talk" to my "scripters" soon...
Many ideas for the story and the quests but nothing really clear 'till now... so much to do, so little time... 'sigh'...

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We made no progress this month!

Well, we did, I guess, but only in individual parts. Cohesively, the game is little changed since last month, but the writing is being tweaked and the character art has been started. Restarted, really, but that's another story.

We don't really have a web site, but if anyone would like to look at a (very) few super keen concept sketches of characters, they can go to this address:
(url="http://"http://home.earthlink.net/~isthaq/conceptart.html")http://home.earthlin...conceptart.html(/url)

Pedrith, I love your script. It's totally classic. I felt like I was holding a Super Nintendo controller in my hand when I read it (that's a good thing for RPG's, in case you weren't sure). Tell Sophie I'm on my way and not to worry.

myshkyn

edit: the link. uh, I just wasn't sure.
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(This message has been edited by myshkyn (edited 05-13-2003).)

Pedrith: That's "scepter" (or "sceptre", if you're feeling international) Sounds like classic 16-bit dialog, though - I'm looking forward to your game!

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'You can either be on the stage, just a performer, just going through the lines...or you can be outside it, and know how the script works, where the scenery hangs, and where the trapdoors are. Isn't that better?'
-- T. Pratchett

Not much progress at all, fishing season and all...
Although i did manage to get 2 more NPC's animated

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Hi. Thanks for the feedback. This is the first draft and has yet to be edited for spelling and such. I'm glad people are looking forward to my game. Yeah I guess some of the dialogue does seem 16 bit like, but then I grew up playing Dragon Warrior and Chrono Trigger so that might have infuenced me perception of video games. I am trying to create a game that I would enjoy and that contains the esscence of the games I grew up with. Only time will tell if I succeed. If people are interested I might post another section of the script, from earlier in the game, but will not post scenes that give to much away. Just enough to entice you.

Myshkyn the concept art on your page looks good. I would love to see some more art when you have it up online.

Pedrith

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(This message has been edited by Pedrith (edited 05-13-2003).)

• gonna update ye ole website.

• animated interface elements.

• easter eggsż

• level design

• redesigned whatnot, finalized graphical style

• theory and mechanics scrawled out in battery acid

• implemented mechanics

• annihilated side projects

• bored with internet

• might not surface for months

• exeunt ż...

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... I'm like Imhotep but don't flaunt it.

your making a game?!

just like in highschool im always the last to know. thats what happens when you dont date a cheer leader........ whose a cheerleader on these boards!?

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My game is going smoothly. Summer break, like I mentioned last month, will really give me time to start pluggin away at my game.

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