Whoa. Two thumbs up.
The overall story seriously was cool. I would use what you have, but make the sentences longer and use more pronouns. The story soulds like its the kind of quality that you could put into a game.
-cybergnu
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hi. brand newbie here. just found out about coldstone last week. (too late for the shareware party & i want it now ) my real reason for joining up tonight is "i've looked all over" but there's no mention of how much the commercial game engine will cost ? any one know ? also, how i might still get the shareware version while waiting for new release?
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Originally posted by panalpha:
hi. brand newbie here. just found out about coldstone last week. (too late for the shareware party & i want it now ) my real reason for joining up tonight is "i've looked all over" but there's no mention of how much the commercial game engine will cost ? any one know ? also, how i might still get the shareware version while waiting for new release?Hmm....it's not a "commercial and shareware" sort of thing. All of Ambrosia's products are what you call shareware. If you mean how much can you do with Coldstone before registering, no one knows. No one knows how much it will cost either.
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Well, what happened is, basically, Beenox and Ambrosia got together and decided to close all the gates and keep everything top secret after that. So that means that they aren't really giving out that kind of information. There's been some speculation, and the general idea is that the shareware would cost about 20-50 US dollars. Coldstone is no longer availiable, as well, as Beenox stopped the downloads. It will only be reinstated at a time at which both Beenox and Ambrosia decide is comfortable with them.
-cybergnu
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