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(This message has been edited by Patrick (edited 09-02-2002).)

enjoy. pt II comes on tuesday, pt III thursday etc. New name is Collision Course.

I'm writing this as an exercise in fiction, so expect more crap before it gets better

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It looks interesting... a little bit hard to understand at the end though (you need more clearly seperated paraphraphs, foo.)

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Bah. A whole week, and my Part 5 chronicle hasn't come up yet.

Great story Patrick, it was very interesting.

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**Bah. A whole week, and my Part 5 chronicle hasn't come up yet.

Great story Patrick, it was very interesting.

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