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    • Ares Chronicles: The End of the Order - Pt. 1 by Captain Carnotaur

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      The
      End of the Order

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      We need to get the kid a grammar check...

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      World War 1 was fought with Machine Guns and Cannons.
      World War 2 was fought with bombs and missiles.
      I don't know what World War 3 will be fought with, but it will be so terrible that
      World War 4 will be fought with stone clubs.
      Steven Hawkings,
      -A Brief History of Time

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      I can't quite put my finger on the mistakes... I know they're there, but I don't know how to change them. Oh well. It's readable, at least.

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      Sundered Angel ,
      The One and Only

      Ares Webboard Moderator, and all-around Nice Guy

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      I think I've figured out how the kid writes these stories:
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      "Let's do this!"
      -Styth
      Titan A.E.

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      No I don't, and I take that as an insult. Besides, this is my first try at writing a short story. All my other ones were at the bare minimum 40+ pages long.

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      To Escape Velocity: Nova and Beyond!
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      Millennium. Its coming, prepare for it.
      Coming to the (url="http://"http://www.ambrosiaSW.com/games/ev/chronicles.html")EV Chronicles(/url).

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