Komak's Stories

(Our hero’s name and info (for a better perspective):
Name: Komak Dante Kol’nama
Age: 27
He has a normal body, normal weight and height. Short black hair, light dark skin and black/gray eyes)

Komak opened his eyes slowly. He saw a white ceiling, then, after a few touching with his hands and body movement he realized he was in a bed. “What the ” – he thought, a bit confused. Our hero looked down and he saw he was naked, only wearing some black boxers. A little cyborg, in shape of an ancient soccer ball, was flying right over his downer part. 2 little mechanical arms came from it and where doing something on Komak’s damaged leg. So then he realized he should be in some kind of a hospital and was being healed. He noticed a few scratches on his body, but nothing important. Suddenly, Komak felt his head a bit strange. “AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!” – he screamed, after touching his head and feeling no hair. A nurse that was in the nearest bed ran to him.
“Calm down, inspector. Tell me what’s the problem?” – she asked, very nicely.
“I’M BALD! I’M BALD!” – he yelled. The nurse grabbed his uncontrolled hands and putted them down. The nurse was using a green full vest and had a funny hat. There was a few letters written in the part of her heart saying “Anic Illiamore”. It was her name. The cyborg had moved away from his leg.
“Inspector, listen to me! You made a few scratches on your head too. It was nothing important but for faster healing we needed to shave your head.” – the nurse said, trying to calm him down. Then he understood what happened and stayed quiet, thinking. Suddenly, the door was opened and Larna, Skinny, a few of Komak’s men and a doctor entered the room. They had sad faces but when they saw that our hero was fine, they smiled and Larna ran to kiss him. “I’m bald.” – he said to her.
“Your still hot.” – she said blinking her eye. He didn’t showed that her sentence made him better, but it did, inside. Then Skinny approached, laughing.
“Hahaha! Your bald!” – Skinny said.
“Eat me, Skinny.” – Komak said, hugging him.
“What have you been on to, motherfoucker?” – the tiny man said, trying to make our hero feeling better. The rest of the people (Komak’s crew) started hugging him and touching his head, smiling.
“Well, it seems that Mr. Kol’nama is feeling better so he can go if he wants.” – the old doctor gently said – “The local feds want you to stop by on their outpost. They need to make you a few questions.”

The group, that came pick up Komak, and our hero headed to the Federal station, that luckily was nearby. He had his Inspector clothes back on, the only difference was his bald head.
“It was the man that attacked us in Rauther that did this.” – Komak said to Larna, but making sure that everybody listened.
“What? Who is that prick?” – she said.
“I’ll break that bietchy mouth!” – someone told. “He knows I’m alive. He will come for me later.” – Komak though.
“How did you knew I was hurt, in that alleyway?” – he asked.
“An old lady found you, sir, so she called the authorities that called us.” – one of his men said. He had gray hair and a moustache.
“How many time I been in the hospital?” – Komak asked.
“Well, around 2 hours. Your ok now, stop worrying.” – Larna replied, holding is hand.

They entered the federal station. Our hero gave all information he knew about that man who almost got him killed and a warning was send to all holovids and fed stations. It was a bit useful, since the man could remove his vest and hat and pass where he wished without being known but we never know

4 days later, Red Carnage start flying to meet Ory’hara, passing trough the chosen systems to secure them. A Moashi Abomination was found on the third system but it was destroyed in a second. 2 pirate small crafts appeared a few systems in front and Red Carnage toke care of them too. Finally, they entered the Polaris system. They detected 1 Scarab and 1 Arachnid on the Radar. “Identify yourselves!” – the Scarab captain ordered.
“I am the Federal Inspector Komak. I am here to escort Ory’hara to Earth, sir.” – our hero replied, trying to seem respectful.
“Follow me, Mr. Inspector.” – The Polaris ship captain ordered. It headed to the space station, while being followed by Red Carnage. The Arachnid kept on patrol. Both ships landed on the hangar and Komak, Kotrach and part of is crew prepared to exit the craft when a man and 6 Polaris soldiers appeared in front of him. The man was dressed with a dark purple robe, was a little fatty and had gray hair. The soldiers were armed with laser guns and green/gray Polaron war armors on.
“For security reasons you can not leave your ship.” – the stumpy man said.
“And who the fouck are you?” – Skinny couldn’t hold himself. Larna quietly punched his back. When the Polaris man saw he made a movement, ‘cause of Larna’s punch, he asked: “Are you feeling alright?”
“Never been better.” – he said, a bit in pain.
“I’m the Inspector and I am here to escort Ory’hara so I must enter!” – Komak interrupted.
“Negative. Your job is escort Ory’hara not to enter this space station. You can bring unwanted company inside your craft.” – the stumpy man said again.
“Identify yourself!” – our hero ordered, tired of that conversation.
“I am the Scarab captain you met outside. My name is Fauik, Commodore Fauik, please. You will stay inside your ship. When Ory’hara arrives, you will be warned, Mr. Inspector.” – the stumpy man said and then he left the hangar. The 6 soldiers kept guarding Red Carnage door so our heroes entered the ship again.

6 hours later, Komak was in the living room, eating, when a man of his crew approached him.
“Ganuk, Commodore Fauik wishes to speak with you.” – the said this to Komak’s ear. He putted the food down and headed to the big, metal door. He pressed a button and it opened, slowly. The 6 guards were still outside and Commodore Fauik was in front of him.
“Follow me, please.” – the stumpy man said. Komak exited the ship and the man that went call him closed the door.
“Where are we going?” – he asked, trying to follow Fauik fast steps.
“Ory’hara arrived 20 minutes ago. We are going to meet him. He says he wishes to know you.” – the Commodore told. They walk trough the station corridors, passing trough other Polaris soldiers and officers. Finally, they reached a door. It was being guard by 2 Polaris soldiers, like those who were guarding Red Carnage. One pressed a button to open the door and the other gave some papers to Commodore Fauik. After that, the guard searched Komak and removed his electric pistol. The commodore entered the room and Komak followed him. The room was all white. The ground, the walls and the ceiling were all white. On the middle, there were 3 black couches, forming a triangle. There was Somebody sitting in one of them, the couch that its back was turned to the door. On each corner of the room there was 4 men, dressed with black robes. But they had something strange. 2 of them had the same face and the others were different. Komak ignored the fact, thinking that they could be twins and sat down on a couch. Commodore Fauik did the same.
“Hello.” – the Man that was already sat said. He had a white robe and white shoes. His hair was blond and he had green eyes. The Man was a bit skinny too.
“Greetings, Ory’hara.” – said Commodore Fauik, very fast.
“Hi ” – replied Komak, a bit embarrassed.
“I heard a lot about you, Komak. I heard that thanks to your help the Federation become good and mighty. Good job, my friend.” - said the blond Man, very nicely.
“Tha thank You.” – he replied, still embarrassed with speaking with the mysterious Ory’hara.
“It is good that you, federationers, made peace with the glorious Heraani house. My objective, as you can see, is to unite your people with mine, then we will try with the Aurorans.” – Ory’hara said, more political.
“Sir” – interrupted Commodore Fauik, showing the papers that the guard gave him –“ here are the systems You are gon’na cross.”
“Oh I see ” – He replied, looking at the papers – “ we should take hm ”
“Around a week.” – Komak said.
“Correct, around a week. So when do we leave?” – the mighty Man asked.
“Right now, if You want.” – our hero replied. Ory’hara nodded and rose from the chair. Komak and Fauik did the same and followed Ory’hara to the door. The guard outside gave the pistol back to our hero. The 4 Polaris tough bodyguards that were inside followed the 3 men.
“Who are they?” – Komak asked to Ory’hara.
“They are My 4 bodyguards. They are clones.” – He replied, smiling.
“Clones???” – our hero asked, very confused.
“Relax, Komak. The Polaris have been studying this technology since a long time ago and besides we are too primitive in the art of cloning we did a nice job.” – He replied.
“Who do you clone and what do you use clones for?” – Komak asked.
“Well, we usually clone death Polaris soldiers and Auroran prisoners. They are used to work on the fields, factories, guards and bodyguards. Sometime when a person from a certain family has a disease and is gon’na die soon we clone that person and give the clone to replace the death person on the family.” – Commodore Fauik said.
“Do they have feelings?” – Komak kept asking, curious.
“They have a thing that we call “fake” feelings.” – Ory’hara told – “ they can have a simple conversation with you but if their orders change to destroy you they won’t hesitate in shooting. When we clone them they stay 6 years on our hands, being trained to their future job.”
“Did you had problems with clones?” – asked Komak.
“Of course. Dozens of clones have killing a lot of innocent people so that’s why we are thinking in closing the clone production.” – the mighty Man replied. They reached the hangar. Ory’hara and His bodyguards entered a Polaris dragon and followed Red Carnage to the outer space, till they enter hyper. The trip to Earth went ok, Red Carnage only needed to destroy a Pirate Valkyrie that kept shooting at the big Auroran craft. 1 week later, they landed on Earth. Commander Ceena, the Heraan Emperor and more important people were waiting for Ory’hara, near the ship’s door. The door opened slowly. The 4 clone bodyguards exited the ship and formed a square position. Ory’hara left the craft and walk to the middle of the square. He greeted everybody that was waiting for him and finally they all headed to the big temple, where Ory’hara was going to made his speech.
“Komak, go to the temple in like 2 hours. We will need more security there.” – Ceena ordered. Our hero nodded and entered his ship. He picked the communicator and said to all crew: “This is captain Komak here. I want some men to head to the temple right now. Your mission is to protect Ory’hara and catch or kill any suspects. I will meet you there later.” He, Skinny, Kotrach, Larna and a few more crewmembers went to the bar. They sat on a big table on the corner and ordered their drinks. After a few minutes chatting a man entered the bar. He had short white hair and was wearing a red jacket, showing his arms. On his hands, he had black gloves. The man was also wearing brown pants and black boots. A shotgun was tied with a rope on his left leg. When he entered, some girls ran at him asking autographs. The man smiled and after satisfying the girls requests, approach Komak’s table.
“My name is Zanu. My enemies call me Del’krypt.” – the boy said, with some hair in front of is eyes. He looked like those heroes of the ancient Japanese cartoons.
“I’m Komak, the federal inspector.” – Komak told, trying to look respectful.
“I know who you are, that’s why I came speak with you.” – said Zanu, then he grabbed a chair and sat. Komak’s friends and Komak himself were a bit annoyed.
“What do you want exactly, mercenary?” – Larna asked.
“Chill out, baby.” – Zanu told, trying to look cool but on that moment, Komak rose from the chair.
“What do you want, fouck face?” – Skinny interrupted. Komak made a signal with his hand for Skinny to shut up and told:
“Look, we are having a peaceful drink here, ok? Don’t call her baby again and tell me what you want?” – our hero asked.
“There is a lot of stressful energy on this table. I just wished to say hello but I can see that’s impossible. Ta-ta!” – Zanu said and went away.
“He’s too cocky.” – somebody said.

Finally it was time for Ory’hara’s speech. There was a big crowd in front of the temple and there was a lot of guards spread trough the area. Komak was a bit far from Ory’hara but he could see him. Near the microphone there was, Commander Ceena, Commodore Fauik and the clones bodyguards.
“HELLO, PEOPLE!” – he screamed on the microphone. The crowd yelled greetings.
“IT IS A PLEASURE TO BE RECEIVE BY A VERY NICE PEOPLE!” – on that moment, a guard left his position and headed to Ory’hara. The crowd started murmuring and Ory’hara gave 2 steps back, looking at the guard. The suspect grabbed his blaster, pointed at the mighty man’s head and shot. Ory’hara fall dead on the ground, with a hole on his head.

What do you think, people???
Third part coming soon.

Yikes. That's a turn that I didn't expect...the savior of the Galaxy drops by, and gets offed. Cool.

Give us some more reactions when Komak meets Scarab ships - has he ever seen them before?

Cheers
Guapo

Why does ONLY Guapo comment about my stories?

Er...because I'm good looking?