Maybe this time I might feel sad for whoever dies or gets injured...
Hey, it might open me up. 
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Originally posted by Jas86:
**GEESE II IS ON ITS WAY! I finally finished writng it, and it will pry be on the chronicles page in a few weeks. At the request of your posts I made the action sequences longer, but the story is infitely more sad so beware.
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Great, I can't wait.
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A life??? Ooo thats a new plug-in right?
"Borb II of V.S.S Hellfire."
I liked your story as well. I think that it could even be a great start of a much larger and longer story overall. Maybe a short history of Wild Geese heroes and conflicts? Defianetly start work on a real juicy short story though. This one was just a little too short to really get into
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It made me cry and Im a 20 yr old male. But Im very much in tune with human emotion and imagination so I can literally feel what is being written if the words are good enough.... I guess I just see what 'Sarah' would have really felt cuz I see that alot...
I loved the story... It was really good. Kept me reading.... keep it up...
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Yeah, I'm crazy. Really crazy. But, Im the nicest crazy guy you'll ever meet.
Just for the record, the Irish don't play the bagpipes, rather they play an amusing dual-armpit based cousin, the Uilleann pipes, which use a bellows for air, rather than the pipers breath... Otherwise, a good story, but watch the punctuation and grammer.
