They are by far NOT the same stories, cow. >=D Jade's Return is about a drone controlling society trying to manipulate genetics in oddly created lifeforms, while A Hidden Legacy is about the Docmother Empire.
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yeah but they carrey on from each other you cant read either of them seperatly.
You wouldn't understand the title for a start with out reading A Hidden Legacy.
Well anyway...
When is this sight gonna be updated its really annoying not having a new story.
---Burning cow---
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I didn't really read too many chronicles and stories, but "Battle for Sol" was pretty good...
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It seems like everything all over the Ambrosia site has been crapping out. Including the Newswire. . .if you ever read the news. 
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Good story and content. However the grammar isn't that hot, a few mistakes and such.
Oh, BIG DEAL, fox. Do better, then talk! >= |
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"It seems everything all over the Ambrosia sight has been crapped out." -Jake 101
I'm not the only one who sees that then.
Atleast i'm not alone.
---Burning cow---
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(This message has been edited by Burning cow (edited 07-12-2001).)
THAT, by far, was he best beginning I have read in a long time! I think I read someone's post that said you need to more descriptive. . . well, I think it couldn't be any more descriptive. Unless it described the rash on someone's butt as they climbed into the escape pod! 
So, it was great. Keep it up and you will gain more of my interest.
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