I had a question. On the info page of the website your description says:
"(The New Era's) main aims are to bring the world together in a peaceful way, and their technology is only used in need...They have adoptted a 'judge jury executioner' style law."
Does this flow? How is a judge, jury and executioner style of law used to bring about peace? Are you thinking in an authoritarian-fascist type of way? If so it might be better suited to say something like:
The New Era aims to bring the world together under a heavy handed, powerful visage of peace. Their technology is used and limited to achieving such ends through a judge, jury, and executioner style of law.
I'm not saying I like that more, it just seems to follow. It also sets up the New Era as an unintentionally tyrannical government that will stop at nothing to achieve their end: Peace. Unfortunately in this situation they would be too blinded by something, like their growing power, to understand that peace cannot really be achieved through violence...Their fatal flaw.
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(This message has been edited by polystatic (edited 11-23-2002).)