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Originally posted by Meowx Design:
**Look, look! I finished the Tarkyl. These are pretty fun to draw! Tell me what you think, Weepul; I tried some new shading techniques on this one.
-david-
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Before I critique, I have to commend you for drawing that freehand with the mouse...that's NOT easy.
Oh, that thing on the front of it's head looks like a rose to me... How does a Tarkyl see??
Probably my main criticism is that the coloring isn't contained within the lines. I too work with each color as it's own layer...that's technically cel-style, with line art overlaid over color. (I can't get it out of my head how funny it seems that real-life cels are made on transparencies) Anyway, what I had done after my coloring/shading is I went back with the eraser and made everything nice and confined.
The shading was a little better IMHO, but could be smoother. If you want to do soft-shading style, you've got to blend edges of shadows etc. a lot. Also, the shading still seems a bit ambiguous: folds, ridges, lumps, and the like should all be shaded. Notable problem areas on the Tarkyl are the folds in the ?shawl? (thing wrapped around it's neck), the folds in the shirt under the armor near the waist, and the red bands on the wrist guard.
I'd like trying to shade one of your drawings, but I don't think I've got the time right now. Like I said, that smallish image I colored (original was 2x final size) took 2 days.
Quick tip: work in 200% or 400% of the final size. That lets you put in smaller details more easily, smooths rough edges and allows you to draw with what ends up as a smoother line, and allows way more precision.
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Originally posted by Kwanzar:
I started experimenting with 2d art a while back, and here's one of my recent self animes... www.geocities.com/beezuz26/picts-stuff/self_anime.jpg (photoshop made it look kinda green)
You mean a self-portrait? Not bad, though I'm not too big a fan of soft-shading unless it's done REALLY well. (dreamshadow.net is really good)
A way to keep Photoshop from tinting color is to go to the RGB color settings and uncheck Use Monitor Compensation, I believe. It works for me...
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Originally posted by Kwanzar:
Hmm...and you're an anime fan!? If you are, you should know anime is the original over exaggeration of characters...big heads, small bodies...huge feet/hands, etc...=)
Not THAT much, though. 8
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