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    • EV/EVO Chronicles: Death Day Ch 3- Information, Punishment, and Kidnapping


      Blake walked into Admiral McPhearon's office. "Admiral, I have news for you. I was in Voinian Space and one of their own vessels destroyed their research station. It blew up the station and released a chemical that destroyed my ship. I got rescued by that Tyler guy, the one who murdered his crewman. He fell into my ship as the docking bay closed. My ship blew up with him in it."

      "I've heard," he said. "He will be relived of duty and punished..."


      Out on Borb Station A Voinian Commander was watching the entire meeting through a camera one of their spies had placed there. "So the UE have a traitor on their hands. We must convince that Tyler person to join us. When he's proved loyal, he will pilot our finest ship with the new cloaking device, the NightFalcon. You Gerd or whatever your name is."

      "My name is Jarn" Jarn said.

      "Whatever," Commander Syris spat. "I want an escort of 5 Frigates to get Tyler to us..."


      Back in McPhearson's office he was just about to leave to Tyler's trial, Blake had already gone, he noticed a faint red light blinking. He looked a little closer and recognized it as a Voinian camera. "Oh shoot! " He yelled as he took out his blaster and fired, destroying the camera. "Oh damnit!" he shouted as he ran out.


      At the court in Verril Prime, Tyler stood trial. "Commander Tyler, your are held charged with these crimes. Murder and Betrayal. You will be punished greatly if found guilty. How do you plead?" The judge inquired.

      "I plead innocent!" Tyler shouted.

      "HA! Scum, don't make me laugh. Has the jury reached a verdict?"

      A juror stood up. "We the jury cast our verdict. Guilty."

      The observers applauded, including Admiral Blake.

      "Tyler, you will work for 3 years in the Ariane mines. After that you will be sent to Luna Prison for life." The judge said with a smirk.

      The observers cheered and clapped as Tyler was escorted by 10 UE guards to his shuttle.

      As the crowd parted McPhearson ran in. "Where's Tyler?" he asked and yelled.

      "He was just taken to his shuttle." A person leaving told him.

      "Damnit, which way?"

      "Over there" the person pointed to the door as McPhearson ran to it.

      As Tyler walked into the shuttle and the shuttles guards stepped in and it took off, the Admiral burst into the room. "Watch out for Voinians!" He tried to shout, but was drowned out by the engines.

      Tyler's shuttle was the only ship in the system. As they flew to the hyperspace point. The guards didn't know, but as the 10 of them sat in front and he sat in the back, he had a Blaze Pistol with him. A Rocket nailed the shuttle in the side as the 5 Frigates jumped in immediately disabling the shuttle.

      "Voinians" Tyler thought, "Perfect, they'll take me away!"

      As the screeching of the docking clamps the guards got ready. A Voinian soldier jumped down and hit one of the guards. Another 3 jumped in and fired as the first untied Tyler. The 3 soldiers were shot down, but not without taking out 2 other guards. Tyler rolled out of the way and aimed at the guards. He shot one down and than jumped into the Voinian Frigate leaving the 5 guards left to try and drag him back in. No dice. The docking bay closed leaving the 5 guards and the Frigate took off. The Shuttle's new pilots tried to jump into hyperspace the Voinian Frigates destroyed the shuttle. The Frigates took off just as McPhearson tried to come to the aid along with Blake. it was too late though. Tyler had escaped.

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    • My only problem is that, were this real, Tyler wouldn't be guilty of murder. While what he did wasn't exactly nice, it did save the lives of many people, in comparison to saving a single life. That, and the judge wasn't particularly fair, was he? 🙂

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    • Well he needed to be found guilty of something so he would be sent off in the shuttle allowing the Voinians to "kidnapp" him 🙂

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      Originally posted by Overrider720:
      Well he needed to be found guilty of something so he would be sent off in the shuttle allowing the Voinians to "kidnapp"

      Well, that makes enough sense to me. 🙂

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      Originally posted by EVula:
      **Well, that makes enough sense to me.:)
      **

      Thanks for pointing it out though, i'm startting to think these are a little too short....

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    • The story's pretty good. I like it.

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      Originally posted by Overrider720:
      Thanks for pointing it out though, i'm startting to think these are a little too short....

      You might want to start submitting a few chapters at a time... This way your posts on the Chronicles will be longer, and more stories will get a chance to show up on the front page.

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      Originally posted by skyblade:
      **The story's pretty good. I like it.
      **

      Thanks, I think i'm going to finsih this one than go back to 1-2 more parts in Rescue From Chorca

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      Originally posted by skyblade:
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      You might want to start submitting a few chapters at a time... This way your posts on the Chronicles will be longer, and more stories will get a chance to show up on the front page.
      **

      I've been trying to that but unluckily for me as soon as chapter 1 is written in the box I have to leave for some place resulting in me submitting 1 chapter

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      (This message has been edited by Overrider720 (edited 01-31-2002).)

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      Originally posted by skyblade:
      (BYou might want to start submitting a few chapters at a time... This way your posts on the Chronicles will be longer, and more stories will get a chance to show up on the front page.(/B)

      Heh, you seem to be under the incorrect assumption that this board is handled like the Image Gallery -- stories go up in a very regular fashion. Now that there isn't a backlog anymore, each story will be here for a week, so if he wants to release them chapter by chapter, it's not big deal, only his readers will suffer, not the other authors.

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      Originally posted by Overrider720:
      I've been trying to that but unluckily for me as soon as chapter 1 is written in the box I have to leave for some place resulting in me submitting 1 chapter

      Try writing the story in an email (actually, try writing it in a word processor... if not that, THEN write it in an email) and email it to yourself. That way, you aren't as limited.

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      Originally posted by EVula:
      **Try writing the story in an email (actually, try writing it in a word processor... if not that, THEN write it in an email) and email it to yourself. That way, you aren't as limited.
      **

      I've been writing most of my storys in AppleWorks but most of these ideas have been coming to me right now so I want to get it down whihc results in gettting the 1 chapter

      1950 posts!!! Only 50 more!!!!!!!!

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      Originally posted by EVula:
      Heh, you seem to be under the incorrect assumption that this board is handled like the Image Gallery -- stories go up in a very regular fashion. Now that there isn't a backlog anymore, each story will be here for a week, so if he wants to release them chapter by chapter, it's not big deal, only his readers will suffer, not the other authors.

      I've posted a few stories up here a while ago, so I know how it works... I just wasn't aware that the backlog was gone already. I haven't been keeping up lately.

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      Originally posted by skyblade:
      **
      I've posted a few stories up here a while ago, so I know how it works... I just wasn't aware that the backlog was gone already. I haven't been keeping up lately.
      **

      Ah, alrighty. Yeah, the backlog is gone because I'm good like that. 🙂

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    • The judge was clearly conspiring with the Vonians. Tyler wouldn't be guilty in most cases, unless it could be proven that the man could have been saved. In this case, I think it was a clear-cut, though undoubtedly difficult, decision: Tyler's first duty would be to the ship.

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