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    • EV/EVO Chronicles: EVO: Chimćra (prologue - chap. 1)


      (Posted on 10-31-2000)


      EVO: Chimćra

      Prologue - Chap. 1


      The year was 2241. The Voinian Empire invaded Sol. Emperor
      Adč was at the head of their forces that fateful day. His
      flagship was one of a handful of vessels that escaped.
      Afterwards, the Voinian Empire plunged into oblivion due to
      most of the fleet being vaporized and low funding from
      reconstructing it. Adč imposed a dictatorship upon his own
      people.

      It is now 2260. There are reports of Azdgari squadrons
      adrift near Kade . . .

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      Squadron Onyx was performing routine patrols when they
      happened across raider squadron "Jade," one of the most
      prominent Azdgari raider groups in the galaxy. The squadron
      was adrift.

      "Lieutenant," said Dennis, "scan for life signs."

      "Acknowledged," replied the lieutenant.

      Admiral Dennis was one of few Azdgari squadron commanders
      who was of another race -- in fact, he was human. He started
      out as a simple mercenary, destroying the occasional
      Renegade fighter squadron and escorting freighter
      convoys until he found himself working for the
      Azdgari.

      "Sir," said the lieutenant, "there are no life signs. No
      organic residue whatsoever. If I didn't know any better,
      I'd say that this fleet was just manufactured and randomly
      sent to a nearby system."

      "How . . . odd," replied Dennis. "Very odd. Check for ionic
      residue."

      "Yes, sir," acknowledged the lieutenant.

      Dennis knew that ion storms couldn't possibly cause a fleet
      to drop dead with no apparent damage. He had heard myths of
      a space-time creature that would do things of this
      magnitude -- disabling ships without any damage and
      eliminating anything organic.

      "Sir," said the lieutenant, "there's ionic residue spread
      all over this sector, strengthening towards the galactic
      west."

      "Right," replied Dennis. He accessed the intercom. "This is
      Admiral Dennis. We're boarding the Jade squadron flagship.
      All senior officers report to the briefing room."

      TO BE CONTINUED . . .

      (This message has been edited by moderator (edited 10-31-2000).)

    • A space-time monster, eh? Sounds cool.

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    • I like your story, and I'm intreagued about what the connection between the Voinians and the Adzgari is, but couldn't you have made the first part longer.

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      Originally posted by Warden Dios:
      but couldn't you have made the first part longer.

      It's just the prologue and the first chapter, so, no, he couldn't have.

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    • I could have SWORN that i've heard this story somewhere before. Oh well. It is a good story though. I wonder if people will like my story?

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      Originally posted by Lonevoinian:
      **I wonder if people will like my story?
      **

      What's it about?

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    • Wait a month.

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