Wow. I've actually managed to keep this up... I haven't been on the computer much so this is a few days late, gomen.

If you have any comments, suggestions, or constructive criticisms, don't hesitate to send 'em my way. if you have any flames or spams, don't hesitate to send 'em to your trash. thank you, good night.

Divals

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"And then god did come up from heaven and said, 'Do my bidding, you pitiful, powerless, weak humans! Go and spread my li... er, I mean truth, throughout the world!' And then he did laugh most evilly, and the planet of Mososuis did split in half, with one half becoming the moon, and the other half, bearing all its inhabitants, did fly into the sun. Yes." -from the Book of Relics, planet Rikka
Ever wonder if illiterate people get the full effect of alphabet soup?
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The model itself is okay, if a bit simple, but the textures conflict with each other badly. There's no consistancy between the plated metal look of the fins, the stained glass cockpit, the striped engines and the blue body texture. I suggest picking a theme and sticking with it, unless you want the ship look like it was thrown togther from spare parts.

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Since it's a fighter, I recomend making the texture bigger.The cocpit canopy seames a bit too verticle, rotate it back a bit. The guns look pretty good, some slight color variation might be an improvement. For the engines, I like the texture, but try adding some modelled detail.

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Get a life, a cyberspace life.

Thanks for all the C&C; (whatever that stands for anyway) guys! actually, it IS supposed to look like it's thrown together. These guys are the equivalent of the Rebels in Star Wars. I'll try to remember all your suggestions and fix it.

Divals

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"And then god did come up from heaven and said, 'Do my bidding, you pitiful, powerless, weak humans! Go and spread my li... er, I mean truth, throughout the world!' And then he did laugh most evilly, and the planet of Mososuis did split in half, with one half becoming the moon, and the other half, bearing all its inhabitants, did fly into the sun. Yes." -from the Book of Relics, planet Rikka
Ever wonder if illiterate people get the full effect of alphabet soup?
(url="http://"mailto:micahg@microserve.net")mailto:micahg@microserve.net(/url)micahg@microserve.net

Not bad.
Although, i think the cockpit should have a semi-transparent glass, not simply a shade of light blue.

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It's time for a new challenge.
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...And so the human race reached for the stars, unknowing of the dangers that awaited them...

(This message has been edited by Skyfox (edited 03-07-2002).)

You should post it on the Image Gallery as well, so that you get more feedack. Looks good though.

_wire

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He would, after all, be an ambassador; between the old and the new-between the creatures of carbon and the creatures of metal who must one day supersede them.
-a quote from Arthur C Clarke's short story, "A Meeting With Medusa"

remember this is going to be a ship aprox 15 pixels in radius...that doesnt leave a ton of room for small details..i think it will be just fine...maybe a lil touch up work for the shipyard screens