This is an excellent, and I do mean excellent, story by Celchu. I like the concepts, I like the material, I like the story!

Read it (url="http://"http://www.AmbrosiaSW.com/cgi-bin/ubb/forumdisplay.cgi?action=topics&number;=49&SUBMIT;=Go")here(/url)!

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Thanks, GlueBubble! I just edited out some of the rough parts and added a small disclaimer so that people won't get so shocked and/or offended in the second paragraph that they stop reading it. Oh, I have this other story coming along. It chronicles the main character's past and the sequence of events that lead to his interesting view on life. I hadn't been planning on doing this, but I asked myself just what could cause this to happen, and started writing.

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We tell stories of heroes to remind ourselves that we too can be great.

This is so completely ingenious and cleverly told and plotted. The perspective of the whole story is explained to perfection. You can empathise for this acheivement-driven character because his point of view is flawlessly deciphered. His unfathomable goals and personal purposes that seem so extreme are comprehendable through the way it is expertly delivered. I think he deserves some karma for this brilliantly written story.

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Originally posted by Kireck L:
**I think he deserves some karma for this brilliantly written story.

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Why, I do believe that you're correct!

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Sweet. Thanks.

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We tell stories of heroes to remind ourselves that we too can be great.

(quote)Originally posted by Celchu:
**Sweet. Thanks.:)

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